Sometime in the morning yesterday, I got this SMS from my friend,
'naseeb kyu mujhse khafa ho jata hain??

kyu na ho shikayat meri nazro ko raat se...

sapna pura hota nahi aur savera ho jata hain!! '

 P.s I will wait for your answer...
                                                                                 ~ Akash

 And I thought about this while returning by metro and by the time my station came and people started flowing out my answer was sent...
This was what i wrote..!
Naseeb chahe ho khafa hum naseebo pe sapne kyu sajaye..
Raat se kyu rahe shikayat jab ye roz ek nayi subah laye..?

Sapne kyu sirf bus band ankho ko sukoon de..?
ye toh harr raat bus ankho se neende uraa lejaye..

Hai agar sapne dekhne ki himmat hum mei..
Toh ye kismat se bhi ye bhira lejaye..
Jalkar agar jeet ho hassil toh jalna bhi manzoor ho jaye..

Pure hone ki shart nahi hai..
Bus cheen lejane ka junoon hai..
Sapne dekhne ka shauk kaha ye kuch kardikhane ka fitoor hai..!
Location: Kolkata, West Bengal, India

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  1. SylviaMarch 14, 2013 at 8:07 AM

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  2. SylviaMarch 14, 2013 at 12:16 PM

    Great work
    Speaking n poems z so lik 80's roms!
    liv it..// cute

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    1. SoniaMarch 16, 2013 at 7:36 AM

      Thanks Sylvia.. :)
      This is my poetic phase, so just drop me some lines and there'll be a poem in answer for you too..!!
      And there ain't no such "rom" thing involved just "bhai-chara" (if you know what i mean!!)...

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    2. SylviaMarch 17, 2013 at 9:45 AM

      Oh cumon!ws js kiddin!
      idk bt i fil hes nt a bhai ka chara!ihop u get wt m sayin!;)

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    3. SoniaMarch 17, 2013 at 11:23 PM

      Hmmmm... Okay...
      He's a really good friend...mera yaar hai yaaaar!! (does that help?!) :D

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    4. akashMarch 18, 2013 at 3:29 AM

      sonia.. bt u beat me this time here!!

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    5. SoniaMarch 18, 2013 at 7:41 AM

      ohh i know that...and it doesn't end here,i can beat you in everything!! :P

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    6. akashMarch 20, 2013 at 7:21 AM

      bollz u sily!! :x

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    7. SoniaMarch 20, 2013 at 7:25 AM

      huh!!silly U!

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  3. Nusrat JahanMarch 14, 2013 at 9:05 PM

    Deep thinking ,,,, moral of the dreams,,, but truth...,.

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  4. FirozMarch 16, 2013 at 1:08 AM

    Kyaa baat!bahut sundar

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  5. Vishal KatariaMarch 16, 2013 at 7:16 AM

    Superb. And very true :)

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  6. SWARIKAMarch 17, 2013 at 3:41 AM

    AWESUM! GUD WAY OF QUESTION ANSWER SESSIONS THRU SHAYARI!!! :)

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  7. Love redifinedMarch 17, 2013 at 11:29 PM

    Awesomely well written

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  8. akashMarch 18, 2013 at 3:33 AM

    thanku..thanku...!! i'l b here shortly.....

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  9. UnknownMarch 30, 2013 at 9:27 AM

    jsss wait n wacchh!!;)

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    1. SoniaMarch 31, 2013 at 7:39 AM

      Ohhkayy... it will be nice if you supply some popcorn... :p

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