Aaj fir ek cigarette...

Here's a poem written by my friend who is trying to quit smoking and below it is my reply poem to him ...
Aj fir ek cigarette jala raha hun,,
uski nazar me ye ek gunaah hai,
mai to uske waade bhula raha hu,,
Aj fir ek cigarette jala raha hu..
samajhna mat isko meri aadat,main to bus dhuaan ura raha hu,
ye uski yaado ka silsila hai,
mai uski yaaden jala raha hu..
mai peekar itna behek chuka hu ki gham ke kisse suna raha hu..
agar tumhein bhi ghm hai to aao,main pee raha hu aur pila raha hu...
ek cigarette ki shama k bahane main apne aap ko jala raha hu..
Aaj fir ek cigarette jala raha hu.....

                                                                                     ~ Akash 
Gam ko aasuyo se na piya toh kya piya..
gam ko zindagi mei na badal diya toh kya jiya.. 
Gam ko dhuye mei urane ki addat nahi humko,
hum toh isi dard k nashe,ki addat mei jiye huye hai..! 

                                                                                                                                      ~My reply!

Comments

  1. SylviaMarch 10, 2013 at 3:50 AM

    they complt eachother. (:

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  2. Rafya SweetsMarch 10, 2013 at 12:42 PM

    Haiyy.. How nice of you to reply back in a poem! Nice! :)

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  3. SulaMarch 12, 2013 at 6:43 AM

    Intense.
    I hav a feelin your friend will b successful in quitting!

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  4. SWARIKAMarch 17, 2013 at 3:37 AM

    AWESUM :) :)

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  5. SoniaMarch 17, 2013 at 3:45 AM

    Thank you... :D

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  6. Love redifinedMarch 17, 2013 at 11:30 PM

    Perfect.
    Complement each other!

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    1. SoniaMarch 20, 2013 at 7:30 AM

      Thank you so much... He wrote a wonderful poem,my response was just an ordinary one... :D

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    tis poem!

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